1. In the article "Destroyed" By Peter Martin, Martin basically describes the subject of what is known as "doping" in the athletic world, which is the use of performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids. He confronts the morals of using this drug, as well as the effects and unknown repercussions it tends to cause. Martin discusses the controversy of doping, which is seen almost as a sin to sports reporters. He urges people instead, to view this act as cheating, and to feel sympathy for the athletes who are now unknowingly addicted to the drug. Martin also believes that doping adds a sort of appeal to the game, making it more interesting.
2. Paragraph 10 ultimately explains how the "doper" is unknowingly killing themselves and cheating in the process. It explains how instead of being demonized by reporters, the athlete should be seen as a cheat and that they have inadvertently lost the true sport of the game. Martin states how now the doped athletes have become victims of addiction and poor health.
3. In the passage "Destroyed" by Peter Martin, one of the quotes that really resonated with me was; “Athletics– those who dope, who take steroids, who cheat– are victims of far more serious maladies than their sports. They will pay the price with there lives, …” (Martin Paragraph 10).
This quote registered with me because it states that by using these drugs, they are not truly winning, but instead slowly killing themselves. These once prestigious athletes are unintentionally committing suicide, as well as disappointing fans, and desecrating the game. The athletes take these drugs in hope of becoming faster, sharper, and better overall, but are only going to be receiving those qualities short term.
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ReplyDeleteHeidi,
ReplyDeleteThe quote is really powerful because we don't realize exactly what the drugs are doing to these athletes. We only see the great game that they play but inside they are dying slowly and nobody knows this. The main thing that we need to do is help educate these athletes and give them the encouragement that they can play this sport with out being "dopers" as many of us call them. Instead of always just punishing them maybe we can provide classes and treatment to prevent sudden deaths due to these silent killers that are in this world.
Heidi:
ReplyDeleteYour summary is pretty good and well written, getting to the gist of what Martin is exploring in his article. The paraphrase still needs a parenthetical (in-text) citation at the end of the paragraph, since this information comes from the source itself, and not so much from you. Be carefuly when you paraphrase!
The last analsysis of your quote was well done and showed good reflection on whether or not you agreed with the author or not. I would review how to cite via MLA, which should look something like this: (Martin 582). You also need to include a works cited, so show the information comes from a source.