The purpose of my topic is to demonstrate just how little the more developed countries have in common with the lesser developed country. We have the luxury of living in a more developed country and often take for granted the things we do have. I chose this topic to give a small glimpse into the importance of the differences compared to the similarities. Also to compare how many differences there are compared to the similarities.
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This is a good topic, third world countries vs. modern functioning ones.
ReplyDeleteI think your purpose paragraph could be a bit more concise. The last two sentences are a bit vague. I think you have a good topic. Be sure to include strong evidence to support your claims.
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